Critiquing

[Orson Wells as CitizenCain]

http://www.blehert.com/essays/critique.html
http://www.writingforward.com/writing-tips-tricks/how-to-give-good-cr...

Hey teach, can we go out to play now?
Instead of you putting yourself in the role of advisor and mentor,
let's hear your critique of "Guinivere's Bed" - you've spent an awful
load of time critiquing our critiques (to no great effect),

The to no great effect part speaks more to your unwillingness to
listen, digest, or address the problematic issues I had raised.
Stubborn is as stubborn does.

//crapsnip//

Ah, well, as Guinever said, one man's meat is another man's passion.

I'm not the one that demanded to be considered an expert. Dale presumed
to have far more critiquing experience than I, which is probably not
very accurate. For one, I have taken many classes requiring critiquing
in the arts as that is what my degree is in and critiquing art and ideas
has carried over in the work world as well. Secondly, I don't demand
worship. Where did you dig that notion up from, DMH jr.? It's real
simple: my only objection is in the treatment of other individuals in
this group, as in any group in which someone is being bullied because
their work is considered sub par and the poet is hung up by the toes and
told they shoudl never write anymore (anyone displaying this behavior in
a classroom or serious poetry group for very long would either be kicked
out, or socked in the nose before long).

Which is exactly why they keep thier bitter spews here, they wouldn't
make it ten minutes on a real stage.


Hey Duckery, I've been performing on a "real stage" for the past three days
and in 13 hours it'll be a fourth and final day. How's that for you, ya
fuckin' douchebag clown? Go to hell you farting fuck-up, and take your
putrid poetry with ya!

[Orson Wells as CitizenCain]

"Her Illustrious Ashes" wrote...

Wow, this says it all. Bad, bitter poets run in packs, looking to feed
off the average person to fill the void or stroke the ego. It's not a
pretty sight but as long as they can keep fooling little red riding hood

it works.
That nails it pretty well.

Hey Duckery, that thing on the wall in front of you? It's called a clue. Use
it, it might come in handy some day.

[Dennis M. Hammes]

Post by Orson Wells as CitizenCain

"Her Illustrious Ashes" wrote...

Wow, this says it all. Bad, bitter poets run in packs, looking to feed
off the average person to fill the void or stroke the ego. It's not a
pretty sight but as long as they can keep fooling little red riding hood

it works.
That nails it pretty well.

Hey Duckery, that thing on the wall in front of you? It's called a clue. Use
it, it might come in handy some day.

JeeZ, Dink, don't you know by now that dwarves never look in mirrors
unless they step on them first?
See "The Dwarf Under the Mountain," this froup.

[Orson Wells as CitizenCain]

And from which we deduce that your lardarse sports a scruffy beard

So you claim to see it, Mushmouth, and digital photography is available
in
http://tinyurl.com/will-dockery-images
Meanwhile, unless your little vulture head has been transplanted onto
another body, your digital photograph clearly shows your bald wrinkled
brown-toothed ass-face, judging from the condition of your face as seen
in
the photograph, Mushmouth.
http://tinyurl.com/whistle-lisper
Clearly shows your prunelike assface, Mushmouth.
Meanwhile your fixation with my appearance is just more of your whining
obsession with "Will Dockery", starting coincidentally at the time I
nailed
your whistle-lisping, gunkmouthed performance of your boring
chopped-up-prose for what it was in my review of it.
In fact, this all began with my review of your vocal, in which you sound
like you're speaking with a mouth stuffed with slimeballs, spewed
through
your rotten teeth (see photo) giving you your trademarked
whistle-lisping
gurgle sound which is both my opinion /and/ a fact, as anyone who
listens to
your recording can discover.
The fact is that I wrote a review that nailed your whistle-lisping
"...The whistle-lisping gunkmouthed sound Rob Evans, the mushmouth poet,
produces may not be a speech defect or the result of rotten teeth and/or
a
stroke but actually is just an example of an unexceptional performer of
no
special quality, mundane, bored and boring, reading an unexceptional
'poem'.
...and you just can't get over it, Mushmouth.
In fact, it turns out that everything you try to attack me about you do
often yourself, Mushmouth: snipping, misogyny, burbling, whistle-lisping
"poetry performances" that can be considered undecipherable to some
people... proven facts by your own "logic".
Try to get over it and stop whining and lying... never mind, that's
apparently impossible for you.

Or just say no to posting.

I doubt Mushmouth will consider that option.


I doubt you could ever consider it either, you narcissstic jackass.