Orsen Wells w/Citizen Cain
2009-01-18 19:27:06 UTC
OK, you asked for this to be looked at as lyrics rather than as
poetry; as words that aren't complete on their own (without music),and as words to be listened to rather than read.
The big problem I'd anticipate is that, hearing this sung as opposed
to reading it, few will get your "lion/lyin'" and "liar/lawyer"The big problem I'd anticipate is that, hearing this sung as opposed
wordplay; it could sound like you're just repeating the same lines
over and over.
That might be, depends on the delivery being right, nailing it, and beingconcious of that requirement. One reason I really look forward to hearing
this (most of you can, Matt has this online, iirc) when I get the disc.
I have a similar situation to grapple with when I perform "Twilight Girl"
for folks who don't know the song/poem, with wait/weight and
Or, maybe, just maybe, your delusional state of self-grandeur causes you tofor folks who don't know the song/poem, with wait/weight and
misunderstand your audience and not realize that they're confused, scared
and maybe a little pissed off at this drunken asshole swaggering around on
stage trying to perform what he thinks is his latest "masterpiece."
But I digress.
Twilight Girl
= snip the solid waste =